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Hi there, nice track, however, I do have some *constructive* criticism for you if you would kindly take heed.

1.) Drums are too dry and generic, need to vary it up a bit, layers, some edits etc.

2.) The snare is weak. Does not cut through very well and could definitely be beefed up and phattened up. Upon hearing your track the 'Action Break' kept coming to mind. Try and locate that particular loop and give it a whirl in the layering, even just the snare alone from that break would help give the track more substance.

3.) The low end is lacking. I was really hoping for a deep, deep sub to just come from all around me but it didn't happen. A real low sub bass enveloping the track would do wonders I think.

Besides that, good job!

I liked the synth parts & FX/samples in this track but I agree with Fringe, the drums & bass are sadly lacking. If you are making drum & bass these are the areas that should be the main focus. Just my 2c.

Awesome Intro,snare needs a proper compress ...and i agree too with fringe and berni if you add some extra layers it will be cool..

Innovative Song